but if you want serious I think frames 192-195 show a healthy amount of knowing what things to fix to make the drawing feel "stronger" for lack of a better word
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In page 22 to 26 -> at page 26
dude looks like cry? if you make smile exagerated he looks like more laugh!
I mean frame sorry!
Just added a SWF option so now you don't have to save 40mb of bitmaps to your downloads folder!
ALSO those "Hey Look" comics are scans from an old out of print book by Harvey Kurtzman. You can find them HERE: http://bit.ly/1TBxoIg
Im going to be honest here, after about 3 days of watching flash movies on newgrounds I was only really persuaded to make an account because I feel you deserve some actual feedback. No other reason. That aside, im not very artsy myself so my feedback would be mediocre at best. The only feedback I have is that the hands are what grab my attention every pic. I dont know if I would call it an art style, but you seem to make the hands or fingers a bit disproportional and slightly larger than other parts of the body. If the point in most of them is not to focus on the hands I would make them smaller. Very interesting to say the least, hope it works out for you.
Also I dont know if its just me but that guys face on page 59 looks like its melting off... Actually now that I think of it quite a couple of their faces look like theyre melting or dripping off. Dont know if thats intentional or not.
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The only intentional melty-face guy is on 131. The rest of them are supposed to be either old or fat or I didn't know what I was doing. A lot of them just have weird noses too.
Also, thanks for the bit about the hands. I like drawing hands, so I guess I have a tendency to make them the focus of the picture. I'll keep that in mind when I get back to doing more refined stuff so it doesn't get gimmicky or annoying.
i really like ur tumblr... but... i hate tumblr... so i hate your tumblr.... at the same time i dont hate your tumblr though......
I like your tumblr, but i hate tumblr itself.
When are you releasing a new cartoon? :(
I'm working on it! I always wonder if it's weird that I keep doing these "updates" but I never put anything out. Right now I'm mostly just focusing on getting better at draftsmanship, but I also have a new cartoon in the works that should be out by the end of the year.
lookin forward to it!
Brewster
frame 8 is really the only thing i liked