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[Fatal Mermaid]

Whoa didn't know you were still around! Where have you been all these years?

Ansel responds:

biding my time

[Peck and Coach Rumble Up The Battlefield]

So do you think they would be a duo like ice climbers or would they be like duck hunt where they're more or less a single entity? I'm thinkin it would mostly be coach doing the fighting but he uses peck as a weapon, swinging him around by the feet. And then there's coach's super move where you have to charge a punch for like 30 seconds but then instead of unleashing it on an enemy he always just hits peck (it insta-kills peck which makes it the most powerful move in the game, which is unfortunate because you can only use it on peck)

alicemargiela responds:

I thought about the same thing with Coach using Peck as a weapon! Just Coach using Peck as like a whip. Or I also thought Peck could be like Gir from that Nick Brawl game where Zim summons him and Gir explodes his enemies, but with Peck, Peck runs towards the enemy and gets killed instantly cuz he's worthless and unathletic.

[Musckles]

i dont get it

Bill responds:

I will fucking kill you.

[Mad Ripped pt 3]

Greatest saga in webcomic HISTORY.

[turtlebro]

oh boy

oh boy is that plenty of pentagons

turtleco responds:

lotta 'gons for all da good boys and girls

[Parapa]

Gotta believe.

[The Farm: page 4]

Outside of the artwork and writing (which was pretty damn good), the most outstanding part of this comic was the structure. For example: on this page the third picture bleeds behind the first two, but because it's raining in all three shots, they flow together as one image. The use of closure here is really excellent.

Great job!

MiddleFingerRings responds:

Thanks very much, I'm glad you liked it.

[How to do a flip.]

Funny stuff.

The best part is, you know someone actually tried it after reading.

[Deep in Thought]

The lines were clean and the shading was nice

The shading was subtle yet stood out just enough for it to be appealing to the eye, especially in the undershirt/necktie area. The shading also complimented the thick brush strokes really well.

As for the wood, using a higher smoothing for the texture worked really well. However, I personally would have picked different shades of brown: a light tan for the main color and a slightly darker tan for the swirl pattern. (It would look something like this: http://bit.ly/fB59uU)

Something you may want to consider is reshaping your brush strokes after you've drawn them to make the thickness of the stroke more consistent.

Yusuf responds:

ok, thanks for the feedback and the example, that will help me in the future. :)

[Wanna Vote 0 on my stuff?]

Well, no

I don't want to become a stick figure and get stabbed by a poorly drawn sword, so I guess I'll vote five on all your stuff now.

Also, where exactly is the light source in this picture? The shading goes in three different directions and the background is just white.